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Rina-ran — Awkward Inclination
Published: 2010-11-10 07:24:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1188; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 23
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Yay role playing!It made me want to draw some BixDra fluff. And then I failed at the fluff and I wanted something where Bix is leaning in on her, smirking deviously ...and that kindda fell through as well...so it is what it is. Something that lays between fluff and something devious. P:
So yeah, it's a fun RP that's revealing a lot of stuff about Bix/Tabias, and its even getting him to act a bit more emotional than usual~
I'm happy with the coloring. I found a useful little feature of photoshop.
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Finally! I've been searching all night for a picture that shows the side of a rose instead of just the top of it.
This small detail shows that you're well on your way to getting the hang of everything else there is to a really fantastic digital piece of art! I really enjoy how well you have displayed the gravity of the girl’s hair, and the expression on the boy is really lovely as well.
I would recommend using a reference picture for the girl’s expression to improve there, as she is seemingly staring at his forehead. When a girl is in shock over a boy going in for a kiss, she will generally lock onto his eyes, in a silent plea of either stop or go. Other then her eye, the expression and posture is lovely. The only thing that seems a bit off is "where did the rose come from?” Was it in her hair? Was it behind her ear?
The boy needs just small adjustments on body proportion, but most of us spend all our time trying to master that, I always find using a reference picture for a couple attempts helps before I post my piece.
Last but not least, a focus on shading. The trick for me seems to be looking at the best works I can find and seeing how they're shading theirs. You've got a great start here!
Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future! a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/l/b… " alt=" " title="blushyplz"/> xo
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Aw, thank you so very much for your feedback! I may edit her eye to fix that line of sight problem (though ya gotta admit it would be hard to take your eyes off of that hair of his. 
I mentioned to another commenter that I did totally fail (more like forgot all together) about breaking off a few strands of hair to show the rose falling out of that bun of hers. Hair has been becoming more and more fun to do though~
Again, thank you so much! I do hope the rose in the drawing helps you however you intend to use it. :3
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Haha the rose was just nice to find, I usually pick on a certian kind of drawing each night, last night was all roses because I couldn't seem to find any with a side view included. *grin*
Without mistakes there is no improvement. Like I said, great job overall. <3
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This looks wonderful! I adore the little details- like the thorns on the rose and the way the hand is grasping at the fabric. It makes the moment look so intense! Lovely work
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Thank you! I think what was going on in my head (I sketched this in the middle of the night to make myself sleepy), was that he was suddenly doing this, and grabbing her quite hard to shock her a bit. Another thought was that he was having second thoughts in his head and so he gripped his fist like you would do when you reluctantly hold back on something because it's wrong or against your morals.
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ah, very interesting. definitely thought it was more of the former and not so much the latter, but either way, your dedication to detail is admirable! turned out excellent.
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nice to see you try some (almost) kissing sences
this came out pritty good though she kinda looks like shes in a daze (unless thats what you were going for then nevermind) great job ^^*
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Yeah, she is. Shocked or so~ Thank you. :3
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Ooo~ I just noticed the little vampire-y teefs! 
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Yessssh~ Tabias usually just smirks with his mouth closed so I rarely get to draw the pointy-nessss~
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I love it!
But her chin looks big to me.
I dunno maybe it's just the position or something @ w @
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Maybe. I can't imagine making it smaller cause then her whole face looks too small (and the eye waaaay too big then.)
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so beautiful 
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Thank you. I'm quite happy with the coloring this time.
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I think I said about everything on Yahoo.~
Bwaha~ I see stuff first or something. 8D
Also, I made these five my desktop background. All five.
It changes. 8D On its own.
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I've done that before with the commissions I got from =shinjyu . Cause she gave me multicolor ones as well.
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I remember that. 8D The one that was green, and one red, right?
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Yeah. She gave me red, green, blue, yellow, and a normal one.
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- GET SOME TABBY, GET SOME~!!
Aww real cute.
Eheheh, I dunno if I should feel happy or feel sorry for her.
Tabby doesn't seem to be the type that's 'gentle'. xD;;;
And omfgz Random Rose ftw.
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Ha ha ha, he's capable of being gentle, just usually isn't. >D
The rose really isn't random...I just did a terrible job of making it look like it fell out of her hair bun. ;o;
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