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Description
Name: Robyn
Real Name: Robyn Mendoza
Current Age: 21
Age of Death: 17
Species: Crudelis Creature
Personality: Robyn is suspicious of new people. She's learned from experience that lack of caution can get her killed. Due to this, she usually distances herself from crowds and hangs in the back. If you ask for her opinion, she's going to be blunt about it since she sees no use in wasting time sugar coating it. Due to the way she was raised, she's modest to the point taking compliments is difficult. Ever since she's been turned and seen a bit of the horrors this world had to offer, it was easy for her to become pessimistic. She's loyal to a fault, once she trusts you of course, and strives to maintain whatever friendships she manages to obtain.
Height: 5'2
Special Abilities:
hypnotism- this ability comes with being a Crudelis creature and allows her to hypnotize her victims into a dreamlike state but she doesn't like using it.
berserk mode- this happens whenever she goes too long without feeding and the hunger overtakes her. She becomes incredibly strong and fast, but at the cost of critical thinking. Robyn becomes a force of destruction until the hunger is satisfied.
Strengths:
-quick on her feet
-great night vision
-agile and nimble
Weaknesses:
-can't see very well during the day
-can still feel pain
-not the greatest at up close combat, but improving
-pure metal weapons (silver, copper, gold etc. as long as they aren't alloy metals) soaked in salt water can kill her. Just a cut burns like she touched fire.
Partner: n/a
Extra:
-twists her neckerchief between her fingers unconsciously when bored
-her tears have traces of blood as it is the main thing that she consumes rather than water
-since her arm/cheek scars and the hole in her chest were created by another Crudelis, they never fully heal
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Robyn /Art (c) tr0n1ka
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Comments: 19
She looks precious deary!
I've also started redoing Vik's REF and hope It won't take
The whole year. XD
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Heart ripped outta chest......
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I think she and my character Ravin would get along just fine :3
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Overall , she's really good ^^
Although the age "16" doesn't fit for her, I might see her more appropriately as an adult ^^
Also the blood-thirsty and cannibal type kinda things are becoming common already. but I loved how it's explained.
I am not that kind of expert, lmao
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I'm going to remake her ref, because the stock photo I used for reference makes her look older than she is <:'D
As for the cannibal thing, she's more of her own species of monster (her story explains further)
Thank you for your help so far :3
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OK I would like to just review her first before reading the story then I want to rewiew that... (cuz I love reading other peoples stories)
OK first off by the picture she has an awesome taste in fashion I will tell you that. But other red color is used a lot in other characters (its OK I did the same thing too) the scar on the cheek I've seen something like that on another O.C but that stitches so I can't say its a cliché and its a good thing. The hole in the heart area is a really good idea as a permanent death its really creative. The eye thing is really cool again I haven't seen it on other characters but the bloody tears has happened a lot, but it seems success able with this character. I like that you put the neckerchief as a weapon I've never seen anybody do that and its a really good idea.
The part that I'm getting confused is her weapons are the neckerchief, talons and teeth... which is close combat weapons, but on her weakness it says she's not really good at close combat... I need help figuring that out please.
Her personality seems pretty fitting for her character but being adaptable should show with her fear as being a monster, that she adapst to being a cannibale rather then always fearing it (I hope you get want I'm meaning) and I haven't found another character that has the same name so that's pretty good right?
In conclusion she's comming along really well theirs a little bit of confusion but she's a pretty good character. I hope this helps (man this got pretty long)
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Her appearance is further explained in her story and her scar is from the last encounter she had with the person who made her what she is. Bloody tears is only when she feels extreme sadness or joy, since she can't cry normal tears anymore. As for the up close combat I was referring to this picture. She is not an expert (gets a few bumps and scratches) but she's not terrible, ya know what I mean? She catches most of her victims. There are very few that manage to escape her; those that do are labled insane from what they tell people about their encounter with her. (but yes, I do see what you mean, I may change that a little bit)
For adaptable, I was meaning to certain situations like climate, who could ever adapt to being a monster when you were originally human, and you liked being normal? Having to eat hearts to live isn't something you'd like to get used to.
Thank you for your critique, much appreciated. :}
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Ok that helps me understand her and again I want to read her story to better understanding her but I'm glad I helped
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alright, let me know when you get the chance to read her story, because that's what I need feedback on the most o
Haven't read the story yet but she doesn't look 16. I say she looks around 19. Mellow doesn't seem to fit into her personality well. Someone with bitter nature would not be mellow. She has too many Weaknesses tho they are all good she needs more Strengths to balance it out. Just some minor things to look at.
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yeah, it's hard to draw her for her age >.>
Okay, I edited the strengths and thanks, will you be reviewing her story next?
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