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fairy980 β if I scar
Published: 2003-12-18 18:06:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 383; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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If I scar,Will I heal,
rip on skin,
this is for real,
a blade on my flesh,
tearing the mesh,
mixing all I feel,
Life and death,
may they come to me at once,
a fusion of a lifetime,
taken by the black raven,
a closed door,
no exit is seen,
the endless road,
into the night,
may the wolfs howl my calling,
till my name on stone is writen!
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Comments: 19
wow! I really like this one! You must have bin well pissed at your mum
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lol yup yup i was, evil rents hehe thanks you so much for the comment
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wow, thats really good
your a really good writer ^^
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hehe im not really...but thanks 
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kool Love it 
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Well, I ainΒ΄t no "literature critic" nor any other thing but I can tell this is good writing for a 14 year old 
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aww thank you
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Cool poem, one can tell you were upset. 
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ye cause them all your emotions come out on the page hehehhe!
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ANOTHER amazing and cool poem!!
*bows to the great writing goddess fairy180*
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Yep, you surely are!!!
And no prob ^_^
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very nice ^_^ creepy but but very well written keep up the good work!
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thank you!
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Pie rocks! tell the world
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