HOME | DD

Balletbabymari — breathe
Published: 2004-06-06 01:38:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 348; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 29
Redirect to original
Description The air is cold.
You don't want to breathe.
Suffocate me.
Suffocate me.
My lungs implode and,
it's cold, so cold.

The knife is sharp;
The light is blinding.
Impale me and
numb my eyes.

That water is boiling.
You want me to fry.
Dive in.
Dive in.
Turn into steam and,
it's hell, fucking hell.

The gun is loaded;
That man's a rapist.
Shoot me and
tell him I'm helpless.

The dog is rabid.
You don't like when i bleed
Bait it.
Bait it.
I like his teeth in me and,
his mouth is foaming, foamy.

The garroter is ready;
That cup is poison.
Give him my neck and
give me a drink.

The feeling is crazy.
You want to love me.
Release me.
Release me.
I want you too; I can't and,
You love me anyway.
Related content

[ TEXT ]


Balletbabymari - In My Bed

Balletbabymari - Would you be my neighbor?

Balletbabymari - a divide

Balletbabymari - cottage with antennea

Balletbabymari - grand canal on rainy day

Balletbabymari - the cleanest sheep in England

Balletbabymari - Window

Balletbabymari - Venice

[ TEXT ]


Balletbabymari - Despiser or Vampire

Balletbabymari - Athlete
Comments: 18

JustAnAddict [2004-06-17 23:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was good, and that just came from nowhere? Well no where must be a good place for poetic people , keep up the great work.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to JustAnAddict [2004-06-18 00:56:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

TormentedSorrows [2004-06-07 16:44:13 +0000 UTC]

wow great poem. I believe it's "suffocate" though.

The gun is loaded;
That man's a rapist.
Shoot me and
tell him I'm helpless.

awesome job. I really liked the beginning too

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to TormentedSorrows [2004-06-07 17:12:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you... (i really wish i could spell)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

TormentedSorrows In reply to Balletbabymari [2004-06-07 17:15:55 +0000 UTC]

haha dont worry about it, I do too.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

frankienexus [2004-06-06 18:54:05 +0000 UTC]

fear can be taken, made huge, made into such lethal things in our mind, specially fear that comes form the giving of the self that love demands. and that fear is a true fear, its a subtle hidden fear which hardly anybody understands

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to frankienexus [2004-06-06 19:03:38 +0000 UTC]

very well put.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

the-sohi [2004-06-06 10:00:52 +0000 UTC]

numb my eyes

i think u just managed to disturb me down to my soul. whoa this is scary. and its nder romance, would that be little signs of and hints at sado masochism?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to the-sohi [2004-06-06 14:48:40 +0000 UTC]

lmao. it's about doing things you don't want to in love. The mean things are just methaphors for how a boy might fall in love with a girl, even when she doesn't want love, or if she does, she might have to do things she doesn't want to... i dunno.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

the-sohi In reply to Balletbabymari [2004-06-06 20:53:17 +0000 UTC]

what scares me is that was my after thought, why in gods name did i prioritize the thoughts of sadomasochism? (is scared of himself)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to the-sohi [2004-06-07 00:50:43 +0000 UTC]

lmao... inner fetish unleashed, perhaps?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

the-sohi In reply to Balletbabymari [2004-06-07 12:25:24 +0000 UTC]

(shudders) BDSM? no thank you.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

killchain [2004-06-06 02:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. +fav

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to killchain [2004-06-06 02:59:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

penniless [2004-06-06 02:02:31 +0000 UTC]

okay I know :fav: isn't one. bear w/me.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

penniless In reply to penniless [2004-06-07 15:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome okay lets try again... ? maybe?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

penniless [2004-06-06 01:54:27 +0000 UTC]

holy fucking shit!

that was pretty damn good.
:fav:

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Balletbabymari In reply to penniless [2004-06-06 03:00:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much. i appreciate the

👍: 0 ⏩: 0