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Published: 2010-05-29 15:59:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 859; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Get this on a t-shirt!This was partially inspired by the reading of 1984 and Fahrenheit 451.
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"Freedom lies in being bold." -- Robert Frost.
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tOmGiRL115 [2011-04-07 19:42:08 +0000 UTC]
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This is quite cool what i thought it was first of all was a preview to a piece of literature because it could really pass as a book cover
if you get what i mean
i like the quote from Robert rost in it but the backwards writing makes it difficult to read...
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green-knickers [2010-06-20 04:35:43 +0000 UTC]
i'm not super great at typography stuff, so i won't go throught the whole uncritic thing and only have a few sentances to write.
for the most part, i like the text and texture. I feel like there isn't a lot to it, but then again typography is like that some times.
the part i have an issue with is the It and Mean. Since i read through the what does right away, my eye is instantly taken to the to be. I didn't even notice the It mean until i had looked through it a few times. It is a good idea, but needs better execution.
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VBAadmin In reply to green-knickers [2010-06-20 14:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment.
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sentient-pencil In reply to sentient-pencil [2010-05-31 19:15:33 +0000 UTC]
great design... the angle of the words and the font even seem to reflect the moods in the two books
however, i feel like the asterisk detracts from the impact slightly
just a thought
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VBAadmin In reply to sentient-pencil [2010-05-31 19:29:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your input; I'm glad you like it.
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