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The first time I wrote this was actually sometime ago.Anyways, I decided to rewrite it because I felt a deep emotion to the subject. I was originally inspired to write the poem because of what people around me seemed to think about the "element" darkness. I honestly wanted an answer to a question that bothered me for a great amount of time; what is so bad about darkness? I began to ponder the question and I came up with a conclusion - which is described in this poem.
The first version was so blunt that I didn't want to repeat it - ever.
'The Elements' poem Β© me
The preview image doesn't belong to me.
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DRA3-NER0 [2023-07-31 14:20:42 +0000 UTC]
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Cosmic-Squid [2018-01-22 04:57:32 +0000 UTC]
I love anything that has to do with the elements so finding this beautiful poem inspires me keep it up
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Torchie-1 In reply to ReverseUnicorn [2016-09-16 04:20:41 +0000 UTC]
It was my attempt at one, yes.
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ReverseUnicorn In reply to Torchie-1 [2018-08-29 22:34:09 +0000 UTC]
Β I meant I just see a picture.
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OtakuCris [2016-08-10 20:09:05 +0000 UTC]
I thought that it was the introduction of a book!!!!
I really like it
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Torchie-1 In reply to OtakuCris [2016-08-16 10:56:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. It does seem to lack a bit of poetic rhyme though, don't you think? XD
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eavandiedre [2015-12-14 17:11:27 +0000 UTC]
The concept is wonderful! Well thought out!Β Β Reminds me of Life & Death...
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Torchie-1 In reply to eavandiedre [2016-08-16 10:56:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
I haven't heard of Life & Death. Out of curiousity, is it a poem?Β
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boychev [2013-10-19 16:33:35 +0000 UTC]
It's so cool. Now i'm jelous that I can't draw like that
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Feanor-the-Dragon [2013-09-27 15:00:14 +0000 UTC]
This concept sounds familiar...
I like how you showed that each element has the power to take away what it gives. Β The contrast of ideas was very eloquent. Β The concept (broadly) is one I've been chewing on for a while. Β I tennd to just categorize things further until they sit neatly into black or white... but you've done a pretty good job of showing that they are really just gray. Β I guess it's the intent and usage that makes them good or bad.
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Torchie-1 In reply to Feanor-the-Dragon [2013-09-28 00:49:36 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.
I agree. ^^ It's not the elements themselves make them good and evil (to be blunt) but more on who is using them. However, there is one more underlying idea in it. Can you figure it out? ^^
Thanks for commenting.
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