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Published: 2008-02-10 18:13:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description A metronome,
Like clockwork,
Back and forth,
Forth and back,
Wavering shadow,
Dim and bright,
Light and dark,
Right, left, right,
My metronome.
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Comments: 4

Imenak [2008-02-12 02:02:14 +0000 UTC]

A great read. I got to say this is better than your usual silliness and haikus. I'm hungry and tired, so I can't get mind consistent enough to applaud you for any themes or devices, but rest assured that I'll figure it out later and praise your poetic power! XD

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ToastCrust In reply to Imenak [2008-02-12 02:42:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thanks!

I'll be waiting. n_n

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MkAura [2008-02-11 13:54:56 +0000 UTC]

...Okay, I get the basics of a metronome now, thanks XP

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ToastCrust In reply to MkAura [2008-02-11 21:14:06 +0000 UTC]

The poem is supposed to be figurative! x3

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