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Published: 2016-01-04 00:47:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1130; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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Check out the Audiologue if you'd rather sit back and listen! :3 www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-k6Ev… Last page: DiRT VOL. #1: therockycrowe.deviantart.com/g…
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Comments: 10
Lol this is really a much better intro than the first-- It really put a lot of context into the story! You did a fantastic job on explaining the shapeshifters and the whole layout of the world! IdonthinkIevenneedtomentionhowFFFFUCKINGgoodtheartiseitherHOLYSHIT
Lol if you care about spelling though, on page 16, it would be 'sacrificed' XDD
UHMMMM.. *tries to think of more thorough critique to add*
Lol honestly....? The way you layered out the whole prologue is perfect-- There's nothing else it needs, unless there's another part of the world you wanted to explain prior to the story! Your word usage is also good, and I love how you tied in the title at the end <3
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Oh duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddddddeeeeeeeeeeee Thank you so much X'D
that's exactly what I wanted clearly conveyed! A total overhaul of the old, vague, unclear thingy I named a 'prologue' that would transform everything for the better! ;w;
and yes I'm a sucker for tying in Titles at the beginning or end of stories and will do it whenever possible! ouo
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YAAAAAASSS you're very welcome! LOL although I think 'you're welcome' is your line in this case, after all the hard work you put into redoing the intro!
IT'S OKAY THOUGH, I LEVEL WITH YOU 100%, BEGINNINGS TO STORIES ARE HARD FOR SOME REASON
I HAD TO REDO MINE LITERALLY 6 FUCKING TIMES
so much wasted time and paper ;A;
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Wow ok that's a way to start off a comic that was amazing and it clears up so much AMAZING and the art ahhhh perfection
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Thank you a ton! Truly!
That's exactly what I wanted to accomplish here! x3
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Well you have absoloutely nailed it and the art work I mean you've always been amazing but this is just the next level you can see the effort and care you put into every artwork
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Holy crap that was such a good prologue!! It was hella amazing >
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