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Published: 2014-09-18 19:14:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 556; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description Narashi is informing his team that they will leave the village for a four-day-mission. In reality, this isn't as much of a team building exercise, field trip and team bonding practice, than a method to get far away from the village, his family, Moriko, Wakana, Masaru, Rentaro and Alcohol. So he is telling them everything a sensei should tell them, from basic rules to no sex because he won't be held responsible. He is very pleased to hear that all his students are loyally devoted to someone, so he doesn't have to worry about that. The trip probably started a few days ago already, I just never managed to finish it in time. That's why I had to squeeze all those prompts in here. I wanted to do more actually, but I kinda gave up on it.

Prompts:

Ninjutsu // Whimsical, Break, Gray Skies, Show off, Breeze
Taijutsu // Use your brains, Exercise, Lift, Tough, Expand
Genjutsu // Imagine, Story, Pollen
Intelligence // Paranoia, Unite, Details, Tracking, Maps
Force // Test your strength, Ready, Dangerous, Inner Strength, Improvise
Speed // Float like a butterfly, Get Away, Escape Artist, Back door, Escape
Stamina // Closer, Monologue, Friends, Nature, Birds and the bees
Seals // Weave, Life, Delivered, Contact, Underhanded

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Comments: 18

Simanada [2014-09-26 18:49:47 +0000 UTC]

o.o Omg, I love how you used this gray-scale... it looks so wonderful and epic and... *can't find the right words*

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Taminki In reply to Simanada [2014-09-28 11:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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datcritiqe [2014-09-23 22:53:10 +0000 UTC]

The use of gray-scale here is something I would like to commend you on. It adds a sense of wonder without forcing you to create assets for backgrounds and such (an excellent means to avoid extra work and meeting deadlines). The focus here was cleverly done with the placement of your character further into the foreground and the lighting, drawing attention to him where many others would fail. Bravo!

However, the position of his hands is a bit strange. As a leader, it may have been better if they were used to show a bit more command (although I definitely understand the difficulty of drawing hands the way you want them). I like how his face helps give insight to his character, but you may have done well to give a little more attention to the second character as I don't pull anything from his face.

Keep on working hard, I can see you going places. ^^

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Taminki In reply to datcritiqe [2014-09-25 12:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, you caught me. X'D
I was lazy and did grayscals to get it done. then again, I like grayscales.

Hmmm, hands have always been a problem. Then again, I am not sure how hands are supposed to show command and if it would fit Narashi as a character. But I'll see about that in the future.
You start to sound like my sister. :cionokayguyplz: She said something similar. Gdi. I shall try my best.

Thanks. ;v; I was actually expecting worse from the way Chacha acted. XD This was totally fine and helpful. >D

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Fouffey [2014-09-19 09:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Awwww Narashi ;v; yeesss abuse your team to escape. Rion at least wont mind. |D adventuuure

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Taminki In reply to Fouffey [2014-09-19 10:11:29 +0000 UTC]

Yep. >C I want more team time. So we're having a field trip!

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ddsgale [2014-09-19 03:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me for a second while I weep over how gorgeous this is and how perfectly you captured Askale's personality... Just... ffffff mah feels man. Now I want to write a freaking multi-chapter story about this mission or smth. FACK. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!

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Taminki In reply to ddsgale [2014-09-19 08:37:52 +0000 UTC]

AHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA
Let's do it. >CCC
Let's powerlevel our dear Askale because she needs to become chunin or she won't even find the poison in her food someday.

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LilleHavfrue [2014-09-18 21:17:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving his clothes!
He's so cool! <3

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Taminki In reply to LilleHavfrue [2014-09-18 21:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Neska designed them for me.
Thank you.

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LilleHavfrue In reply to Taminki [2014-09-20 02:12:01 +0000 UTC]

I'll stalk more of her designs later -haha
Nope <3

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innocent-rebel [2014-09-18 19:19:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Narashi looks really cool and in command, while still having a slightly disgruntled look about him, and Askale looks torn between bored and exasperated that they're going on such a long mission. Love it! Also the grayscale looks really good to.

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Taminki In reply to innocent-rebel [2014-09-18 19:55:58 +0000 UTC]

AHAHA, looking at Askale I got a feelign that she was trying to hide how much she hated that idea by going " ok then" or something. Too lazy to throw a fit.
Thank you ;v;

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cadefoster [2014-09-18 19:19:10 +0000 UTC]

The lighting or light source and how it fades out for some reason is very cool to me in this picture Β 

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Taminki In reply to cadefoster [2014-09-18 19:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ;v;

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AisteachSam [2014-09-18 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha Narashi using his team for his own means, why am I not surprised

but he looks so epic as a sensei though

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Taminki In reply to AisteachSam [2014-09-18 19:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Because he always did things like that.
Hohoho, thanks.

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AisteachSam In reply to Taminki [2014-09-18 20:01:45 +0000 UTC]

hmmm indeed

welcomeΒ  e w e

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