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Susiron — Phoenix Ashes - 3
Published: 2011-07-19 07:15:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 977; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 21
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Page three of the comic that I'm trying out. C:I'm actually enjoying this so far, but I don't know how I'll feel once I have to get more in depth with the backgrounds and text bubbles, LOL. xD
I'm not the best with speech bubbles or text, so sorry that those look like shit. Maybe I'll get better with them as I go. xD
I'm not sure if I conveyed it well at all in the last panel, but the colourful squiggles are supposed to represent Gaia's scent/essence. He has a sort of presence of all seasons, and all weathers.
Gaia is copyright to me.
Phoenix Ashes is copyright to me.
Drawn on SAI.
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Comments: 19
Loving the comic!
I'm a big fan of SAI.
Too bad it don't handle text...
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Oooooh.. this should be interesting. =3
nice comic! I love the smooth colors <3
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I like how you 'connected' the first two panels with his wing
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It's not really connected, but I see what you mean, it does look like it is. xD
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Dat Fawx. It's so adorable! And these are really coming out great.
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xD -- I might have her come back later in the story, just to pop in, but she's not a persistant character.
Thank you. C:
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Haha that's fine. She's just so cute. c:
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Awesomeawesomeawwwweessoooomme. lol
The expression in panel two---AAHHH! xD
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CB
He's just like: "I see you there. > u >"
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omg, I love his eye color! 
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Which eye colour? He has two! 8D lol
Hopefully I'll keep you interested! :3
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Now I see it 
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I think you did the last panel pretty well. And i love how cute the fox looks in the 3rd panel
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Haha, I'm glad! xD
And I'm starting to love to draw this little girl, but her markings are a PAIN, lol! x3
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Nawwwwww but shes looks so cute with her markings!
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