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Published: 2010-08-18 12:06:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1132; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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Same as the "Daydreaming", but this time I really wanted to try something new and play with cold tones.
The face looked a little weird, turned out to be the colours, so I desaturated it a bit. And no, my eyes are not blue, sadly.
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=Since91, I know you asked me to critique [link] but I felt for me this image was much more compelling, so I hope you dont mind that I spent the time to critique this image instead.
I love this image, I think the cool tone works so perfectly with your eyes (which are fantastically stunning by the way). I love the way your face is placed in the image, not only framed nicely by the edge of the image, but so nicely by your hair as well. the slight tilt of your head adds a nice bitt of attitude, and the intense stare is gripping. The curve of your lip give only the hint of a smile to come, but which can easily slip into a frown.
I really like the bokeh on the left from the flowers you are holding, it adds such a lovely element. I would like to see what this type of image could look like with lace, or something like that.
did you add blurring? it looks like your lips are soft from a Gaussian blur, instead of a typical of DOF softness? typically the lips are pretty close to the same depth as the eyes, and so if your eyes are in your lips will be. (also there is hair at the same depth that is in focus.) if you still have the PDF with the gaussian layer in it, it might be worth it to make a small edit on the mouth to make it feel a bit more natural. if not, it is still a fantastic image as is.
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did you add blurring? No, but I have removed some of the noise, which blurrs the photo a little, and sharped the eyes a little, so that's where the difference comes from.
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Ahh, I see, well I understand now, like i say, its not terrible, it was just something I noticed, the image is still pretty sweet
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No problem, I'm glad you told me, so that I know what to do next time.
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Great play with the cold tones and those eyes are like gems! This one is rather ethereal.
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its just so beautiful. i love the colors. you have a timeless face my dear!
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Thank you so much! 
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nice work!
she really seems to look right through the viewer, wich for me, caputures the 'daydream' expression really well!
the make-up (wich is a bit photoshopped
the flower on the left (is it a flower or a plant?) distracts a little, but not enough to draw your attention from those beautifull brown eyes!
i'd consider it job well done! the framing works well, her expression fits the mood, i like it!^^
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It's a kind of plant, don't know exactly what it is, it is withered, but we kept it in a vase as a decoration.
Thank you for your comment!
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Pretty picture! Her make up looks really nice, though I can't tell weather it's make up or photoshopped? anyhow it looks good
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It's photosopped, but don't tell anyone. 
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hihi XD worked out fine.
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This is beautiful! I love the colors. I like how her expression...pierces you. And the make-up, is absolutely amazing.
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