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Working on composition... really unhappy with it. I need stronger focal points!!!Related content
Comments: 41
kirikachan [2009-05-05 08:47:36 +0000 UTC]
haha, awesome picture! 8) love all the little details and those weird creatures are adorable! i really love pictures like this.
fantastic work!
have a nice day 8))
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erikakochanski [2008-08-23 06:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Looks really effective in black and white! Nicely done!
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phoinixLondonblack [2007-11-03 15:16:10 +0000 UTC]
wonderful drawing you have really good hands
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lsantana [2007-10-29 23:26:28 +0000 UTC]
i like its composition. and the little cartoon-ish animals on it.
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asteris-k [2007-10-11 17:51:03 +0000 UTC]
try to put color in some elements .. i love it in black and white
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photoshop-addict28 In reply to asteris-k [2007-10-12 00:06:25 +0000 UTC]
Will try that thanks
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subliminalthoughtz [2007-10-09 19:44:59 +0000 UTC]
crazy as hell. a mental trip visually created. keep it up. mos def a fave.
check out my gallery
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lOst-ParadigmS [2007-09-23 22:17:28 +0000 UTC]
Try to add some accents playing with scales an contrast. Anyway, its a fine composition, awesome details, lovely concept
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photoshop-addict28 In reply to lOst-ParadigmS [2007-09-24 09:56:55 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!! I will do that
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feanne [2007-09-18 17:14:15 +0000 UTC]
What ARE those things??? They look like cute squishable jellyfish to me! :3
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photoshop-addict28 In reply to feanne [2007-09-19 03:53:41 +0000 UTC]
Lol i've got no clue... i really should... was half asleep when i was making this piece
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feanne In reply to photoshop-addict28 [2007-09-19 07:10:31 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't matter because they're cuuuuuute :3
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Kielty [2007-09-13 23:37:26 +0000 UTC]
Gotta say i love everything about this, specially your cute illustrations, you have some skills.
Easy
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GillianAlexiel [2007-09-08 18:24:23 +0000 UTC]
your work is so detailed...that is what makes it unique and interesting. so it is funy to hear you dismay about focal point. i think where you leave a lot of 'space' like the womans face makes the best focal point in the midst of all your details. i really am drawn back to it again and again. and with all the chaos...it IS a strong focal point to me...because it's like an island for my vision to land on then it goes and search for more details...
sorry is so much writing, but i hope it makes sense. <3
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photoshop-addict28 In reply to GillianAlexiel [2007-09-09 23:16:23 +0000 UTC]
I love lots of writing!!! thanks so much for your thoughts
But i really do see what you mean now its not a particularly large focal point, but rather a focal point defined by space. Also thanks for the comments
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photoshop-addict28 In reply to juliatrotti [2007-09-01 09:36:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks lots. Means a lot!
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Monsterscape [2007-08-30 18:37:34 +0000 UTC]
Since I've never had any professional art instruction I know that I lack in certain areas, composition being a big one. But to me this looks fine. Do you use symbols at all in your work?
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photoshop-addict28 In reply to Monsterscape [2007-08-31 13:15:00 +0000 UTC]
Lol, want to but i find them somethimes too stationary looking. I usually just use symbols to store vectored inspiration
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SeeminglyDepressed91 [2007-08-30 04:01:01 +0000 UTC]
hehe, love it.
your style is so....whimsical ^-^
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Banzai-Baka [2007-08-29 19:57:26 +0000 UTC]
yea I can see what you mean about the focal point...but its still executed nicely
bravo
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javisco [2007-08-29 19:45:19 +0000 UTC]
WTF, there is no code for ":yay:"
my bad umm...ill use all time fav ""
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javisco [2007-08-29 19:44:31 +0000 UTC]
i dont think you should be unhappy with it. its very random and thats what I think is the strong point of this piece.
however I would suggest you place your signature somewhere else part from that top area, that makes it seem cluttered, off to a side and you got yourself a winner!!:yay:
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flamingantares [2007-08-29 15:17:30 +0000 UTC]
no worries, i think its got potential. maybe make those character blob things as a signiture drawing, and develop it a bit.
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