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MurfQ — No Place To Go
Published: 2004-01-30 17:43:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description Curled up on a bench
Rain falling all around
Seemingly unaware
Who is there to care?

Would the bottle drown his sorrows one more day?
Would the rain someday fade away?
Would the silver lining begin to show?
Or would this his lot in life remain?
No friend
No home
No place to go

I stop to look
Then walk on by
How very sad
I think aloud
But what can I do?
And so I continue on my way
As if this were just another day

Though I can close my eyes
I cannot close my heart
There must be something I can do
Somehow I must let them know
There is a friend
There is a home
There is a place to go
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Comments: 7

ZmanzDaOnlyMan4Me [2006-10-05 04:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh.



Wow.

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MurfQ In reply to ZmanzDaOnlyMan4Me [2006-10-19 18:48:28 +0000 UTC]

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wait- [2004-11-08 19:10:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome Cindy, so true... we feel like this so often... It's really full of emotion, the last stanza... I love the hope and care that you offer... it's awesome.

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MurfQ In reply to wait- [2004-11-08 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. When I look at this though it seems rather unfinished. I mean, I wrote this several years ago and I still have the same questions. What can I do? There has to be something...

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greekbutterfly7 [2004-03-03 23:49:06 +0000 UTC]

ohh wow...I love this poem so~o much. Its is so~o full of emotion and care! I love the way that you wrote it *smiles* God Bless

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MurfQ In reply to greekbutterfly7 [2004-03-04 01:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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greekbutterfly7 In reply to MurfQ [2004-03-04 02:04:40 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome completely! God Bless

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