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Published: 2004-04-23 12:58:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 29
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Love is a commitmentOne to another
It has opened a new realm
Yours to discover
You built a special bond
As you both did discover
It’s really rather obvious
You were made for each other
Too beautiful for words
This love that you’ve found
And with the passage of time
It will all the more abound
Growing stronger over time
Your love will keep increasing
Changing every day
Yet with no signs of ceasing
Hand in hand together
Come what may
It really doesn’t matter
What others may say
As that day approaches
May your hearts overflow
With the joy that produces
A brilliant, radiant glow
And let all fear be far from you
And peace fill your hearts
Knowing that together
Your life really just now starts
Keeping God as the center
This bond will never come undone
And so always and forever
You two shall live as one…
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Comments: 25
Sachmoe64 [2004-10-27 15:54:23 +0000 UTC]
awesome poem merf!!!!! well done, very well done. i like the last few lins the best
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MurfQ In reply to Sachmoe64 [2004-10-28 17:32:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. The last stanza is my favourite as well.
Oh, and thanks for the watch. I feel honoured to have a great artist such as yourself watching lil ol me...
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SilverAme [2004-09-20 13:52:15 +0000 UTC]
The picture is lovely. Great idea, using it as a preview.
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MurfQ In reply to SilverAme [2004-09-20 14:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you. Of course the picture could not be lovely without a lovely subject...
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jesus-freak [2004-09-08 03:39:46 +0000 UTC]
wow, great poem and Great photo. Looks like they had their wedding in a beautiful area, where is that?
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MurfQ In reply to jesus-freak [2004-09-08 17:02:47 +0000 UTC]
Yes it is an absolutely beautiful area, one of my favourite spots. They were married on Signal Hill, which is a national historic site here in St. John's. It's where Marconi received the first trans-atlantic wireless message among other historical connections. It's a beautiful spot where I personally love to go with a camera or just to sit and think. Actually, my devID and desktop were also made with pictures taken from Signal Hill, although from the opposite side of the hill from where the wedding was held. I must say, they had an absolutely perfect day for their wedding. It's generally quite windy at Signal Hill which was a bit of a concern, but that day there was just a gentle breeze blowing. Enough to blow her veil around but not enough to cause any real concerns or blow anybody off the cliff
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compboy [2004-09-04 01:00:00 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Murf, that was beautiful. Heartfelt, too. I passed my congrats uppon the happy couple, par you order . You as a maid of honor, that's kinda scary... no offence intended....
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MurfQ In reply to compboy [2004-09-07 13:26:19 +0000 UTC]
That's ok, I thought it was kinda scary too. Me in a dress.... YIKES... But alas, it was still fun and I did get to roast (I mean toast) the bride and groom...
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ServantofJesus [2004-09-02 17:38:11 +0000 UTC]
This truly IS a beautiful piece of work!
my favourite bit is at the bottom:
"Keeping God as the center
This bond will never come undone
And so always and forever
You two shall live as one…"
how very true
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MurfQ In reply to ServantofJesus [2004-09-02 18:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanx. That's my favourite part too!
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pldr In reply to MurfQ [2004-10-06 17:54:04 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree, even though... or because... I'm already hapily living as one for 14yrs. Under God's protection too you know
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MurfQ In reply to pldr [2004-10-06 17:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I hope you have many more. And thanks for stopping by.
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megiddohill [2004-09-01 15:25:12 +0000 UTC]
Mawwage...Mawwage is the weason we are gathared here todaay.... Will head over check out galleries give congrads... makes me wish I would get married and ..... wait ... no... scratch that.. But that was a very beutiful thing you wrote for them.... nice one luv
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MurfQ In reply to megiddohill [2004-09-01 15:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Aww thanx. I was the Maid of Honour at their wedding so I had to give a little speech/toast to the bride thingy at the reception. I worked this poem in, minus the "As that day approaches..." bit since that didn't really fit anymore.
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Karlthejellyfish [2004-04-24 01:53:47 +0000 UTC]
*sniffle* Very nice. I've got things I want to write and say too... but I'm saving it until I'm there.
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MurfQ In reply to Karlthejellyfish [2004-04-26 12:10:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanx I look forward to hearing them....
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gemini86 [2004-04-23 21:43:09 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is so touching sniff well i hope one day you'll be one with your special one also
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smoothluck [2004-04-23 15:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Cindy this one is beautiful and wonderfully touching.
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MurfQ In reply to smoothluck [2004-04-23 16:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks It was easy to write since it is for two very special people.
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SilverAme [2004-04-23 13:24:34 +0000 UTC]
*crying, really*
Thank you so much. It's beautiful.
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MurfQ In reply to SilverAme [2004-04-23 16:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Aww... don't cry.... I'm glad you like it.... but don't cry.... you will make me cry too.....
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Smole In reply to Smole [2004-04-23 13:56:17 +0000 UTC]
What you wrote Cindy was extremly touching... thank you so much...
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MurfQ In reply to Smole [2004-04-23 16:39:32 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.... You guys are so special....
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