HOME | DD

Published: 2009-09-20 01:22:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 841; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 27
Redirect to original
Description
This is the first time submitting a drawing in forever. Oh man. Well, I drew this last week and I've finally gotten around to scanning it. I did tons of detail work, especially on the facial structure and the feather earring. Both my parents hated it because he's an elf, so I'm needing some better feedback, please. Constructive criticism is welcome as well.This is Akyro from the story "The World of Rayne". He is a forest elf. He turned out a bit different than I imagined, but I still think he looks alright.
Enjoy!
PS: If you full view, you can see some really great detail and individual pencil strokes. My favorite part is the eye and the top of the nose. Be sure to check that out!
Akyro and the World of Rayne are both copyright to me, Kinsara.
Related content
Comments: 21
HareSoup [2013-11-09 00:58:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's awesome! I do see the eye and nose strokes. But I especially like the cheek bones and that small dimple next to his mouth.
And it's interesting because I collaborated with someone to make a forest elf race and it's cool to see another person's forest elves.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yootah [2010-03-31 15:16:21 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember if I faved or commented this on my old account, so I'll do it now.
I love your profile drawings.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
InkyRaevyn [2009-09-26 23:31:32 +0000 UTC]
NGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH KINSARA!!!!!!!!! WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT LIFE?! Lol. I love it. And, btdubs, parents know nothing.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Kinsara In reply to InkyRaevyn [2009-09-27 00:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Inky you are so silly XD But thankyou so much. I'm glad you like it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Queenofdragins [2009-09-25 21:51:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh!i missed your art!*hugs it*
First off Kin...IT DOESNT LOOK LIKE YOURS!
(in a good way)
This is a very detailed facial profile and a very good one :>
Youre right,i really do love his eye(and him in general *growl*jk)
And the hair!Also,youre very good with feathers too did you know that?;D
Anywho kiddo,keep up the good work and hope to see more
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Kinsara In reply to Queenofdragins [2009-09-27 00:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thankyou, Dreki! You're amazing You give the most wonderful compliments.
I'll try my hardest to produce another piece to put on. All honors classes are really killing me
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Queenofdragins In reply to Kinsara [2009-10-03 01:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Ohhhhh i hope school is going ok for you Kin hun
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Falling-Zephyr [2009-09-20 15:58:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow, awesome! The details are great, I agree that you have improved so much! It's amazing, wonderful job!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Kinsara In reply to Falling-Zephyr [2009-09-21 00:10:24 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou so much, Zephyr! Your comments are much appreciated.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
tigerstar44 [2009-09-20 03:35:48 +0000 UTC]
i have to say that this is beuatiful, you have the paticences to do amazing details with a picture. 8) i think you have improved greatly and the fact that your parents don't like ti because it is a elf doesn't make since to me. but i usally just ask my dad about my pictures when i need to know something looks horrible (he never knows what my drawings look like ) i also think you did a really good job on the shading, it looks perfect 8D i don't think there is anything wrong with this picture to be honest =^_^=
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Kinsara In reply to tigerstar44 [2009-09-22 02:24:49 +0000 UTC]
Nyaaaa *hugs* Thankyou so much! You give the most wonderful compliments! Thankyou so so so much! You made me feel amazing and all happy inside
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
tigerstar44 In reply to Kinsara [2009-09-22 03:58:04 +0000 UTC]
no problem =^_^= you diserve it. i hate it when people who ahve talent have others stopping them. and i see alot of talent in you.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Kinsara In reply to tigerstar44 [2009-09-22 22:54:59 +0000 UTC]
*cries* thankyou! You make me feel so happy!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
tigerstar44 In reply to Kinsara [2009-09-22 23:51:58 +0000 UTC]
yay i made someones day instead of distroying it 8D but i am glad your happy =^_^=
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
horsegirl99 [2009-09-20 01:53:33 +0000 UTC]
*Gets random urge to color* resist...you have to resist
sry... Amazing piece! I REALLY love the eye, feather, and hair.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Kinsara In reply to horsegirl99 [2009-09-22 02:25:12 +0000 UTC]
Go ahead! You can color him if you like! I loved your amazing coloring on Baku-Sei!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
horsegirl99 In reply to Kinsara [2009-09-22 12:00:43 +0000 UTC]
Yea! I might, and i might now, depending on if i get some other stuff done
👍: 0 ⏩: 0