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Published: 2009-01-22 16:54:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3024; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 377
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Queen! (again)L-R Freddie Mercury, Brian May, Roger Taylor, John Deacon
This started life as a pencil drawing from a reference photo, then turned into a permanent marker extravaganza...I don't like how their faces turned out, and will redo this probably. There's some whiteout around here...
Anyway, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM required. I can't fix this if I can't see what's wrong with it. Please?
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freddie and roger are really prettyΒ Β
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Thanks a million, muffin
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I love it a lot. I hate critiquing things because I'm not an excellent good artist myself...
Roger's nose seems kind of short *cringes* BUT I THINK OVERALL IT LOOKS VERY PROFESSIONAL!
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I think you're GREAT! You skills shouldn't limit your ability to have ideas, either. Thanks a lot! It helps
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I think the faces have a good cartoony quality about them. Great detail in the clothes. I like it.
If I had to make any crits, I would say John's hair looks like it's not his. But then again, when he had long hair, it didn't seem right anyway. Maybe it was the way he had it cut.
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Lol, I'm trying to get away from the cartoony! D:
Thanks a lot. Everyone keeps telling me different things, so I might just leave it this way, I don't know.
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I don't think there's anything wrong with it. Only one thing though made me a bit confused, because I think that Brian's and Freddie's hair are a bit too similar to me. 
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Thanks so much dear! The feedback is much appreciated
Btw, thanks for the watch!
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It looks wonderful dear, you truly have a style of your own! I especially love the details on Roger's jacket.
My only crit is that Roger's eyes are a tiny bit unbalanced. I think their faces all look fantastic though, you nailed their defining features - Freddie's jaw/chin, Brian's nose/eyes, Roger's whole face looks awesome (despite my crit), John's nose/mouth etc. I love this!
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Thanks a lot, dearie, especially for the detailed crit! That really helps
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That's freaking awesome! 
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It does! Thanks a lot
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This rocks!
I think you should show more flow in hair Bri's hair is fine though
I still think this is brilliant, Iris Keep up the great work!
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Oh wow, never thought of that! Thanks so much, Taz!
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I think it looks great 
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Thanks a lot dear! That helps!
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I love the way Roger turned out to be! Surprisingly enough...
I wish I could draw more than one person in the same project, hahaha.
I think this looks great and I've missed your art! I was quite relieved when I checked the messages and saw this. Finally!
As for some critism: BIGGER UPLOAD WOULD DO GREAT 8D uhm, Brian looks a little more drowsy than he usually does, but I loved this! Link to the ref-photo? I NEED IT.
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Aw, thanks Siri!
This should be it..
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Ok, thanks for the Brian crit! I'll upload it bigger when I fix it up a bit.
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No prob!
And thanks for the link, that picture was really beautiful.
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I think it's great, you don't need to fix it
Everybody looks soooo cute <3
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