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The smell of leather, gliding over your skin,My lips moving, not sure where to begin.
So much pleasure, and so much pain,
Watching your blood fall, I make it rain.
It splatters on the floor,
It runs to the drain.
I'm cleansing your body,
With its filthy stain.
The bonds tighten as you scream out,
I'm laughing so hard, watching you doubt
Your morals, your fears,
As I bring that edge near.
Did I take it too far?
If so, that's too bad.
You believed the illusion
Of control you never had.
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Comments: 85
okamifuyu [2011-08-20 21:37:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm really not the poem liking type, but this one i liked, so a job well done
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Moon-Tribe [2011-07-05 01:51:04 +0000 UTC]
nice job. captured the dirty erotic nature quite well.
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ShinomiYuukina [2011-05-31 07:29:02 +0000 UTC]
*Has risen back from the dead* Wow *O* so beautiful //shot I missed reading your work *hug* though idk if you still remember me x_x
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Hiddendemon-666 In reply to ShinomiYuukina [2011-05-31 11:53:31 +0000 UTC]
*huggles* Welcome back ^^
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ShinomiYuukina In reply to Hiddendemon-666 [2011-06-01 06:36:53 +0000 UTC]
XD I'm glad to be back~ and I'm still upset about those mature filter things =3= I'm just 1 year under it now...
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Nice quote by the way ^w^b I love it~
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Bed-oO-Head [2011-05-06 21:50:45 +0000 UTC]
Aaah, I keep hearing this lovely hip-hop beat (alΓ Nujabes) to this, in my head..
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up4anythingi [2011-05-05 00:25:21 +0000 UTC]
... Should it be "Your morals," instead of "You morals,"? I mean I absolutely loved it, just curious. You write wonderfully :{)
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Hiddendemon-666 In reply to up4anythingi [2011-05-05 02:36:05 +0000 UTC]
XD it should be. Fixed ^^ You're the only one who noticed, Lol
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up4anythingi In reply to Hiddendemon-666 [2011-05-06 19:06:14 +0000 UTC]
lol doesn't shock me.
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DominiqueDuong [2011-05-04 17:22:26 +0000 UTC]
Your poetry is so good <3 And I love poems that tell a story of sorts, rather than just waffling.
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Yaoi-Expert In reply to Hiddendemon-666 [2011-05-05 12:46:38 +0000 UTC]
yes, im normally quite loud and as many people put it gobby so if im speachless that in amazing! it was brilliant!!!!
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Hiddendemon-666 In reply to EdwardElricsOnlyLove [2011-05-04 12:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome~
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ShinaRyun [2011-05-04 05:35:26 +0000 UTC]
'You believed theillusion of control you never had.' Inspired, sir.
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Hiddendemon-666 In reply to ShinaRyun [2011-05-04 11:03:10 +0000 UTC]
Glad I could help^^
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ParadoxCore In reply to Hiddendemon-666 [2011-05-04 17:10:42 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^^
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Art-Greylace In reply to Hiddendemon-666 [2011-05-04 21:41:58 +0000 UTC]
I love you for it, you know that, right?
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