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H0lyhandgrenade — Waste Disposal
Published: 2008-10-19 00:16:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3043; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 21
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Missed out putting up here the page before this due to major suckage.Sorry Oak... Not evil. Just... unhinged, I'd say. The original version I did for that bottom panel was a lot eerier but I decided I'd rather be able to sleep at night.
It's not the best but I quite like this page... Atticus' jumper's a lot of fun to do with the detail.
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I'm glad the last one gets a trainer in the comics. Disposal is just plain disturbing...
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Hey this looks familiar.
But I'm going to have to critique you here. The second/third panel dialogue is a little confusing and it's difficult to tell which one should be read first. Probably because the speech overlaps, maybe also because I can't remember exactly what was said on the previous page.
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A critique! My word.
To be honest I have to agree with you- This is something that occured to me as an issue before I put it up but what with the speechbubbles being handdrawn I couldnt rearrange them. Not my best speechbubble layout admittedly... I'm sorry I'll do better next time I promise!! *sob sob*
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I told you all that laying out wasn't worth it.
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A single fluke! A single unfortunate fluke that just happened to pop up just after I'd been explaining how planning it out makes the layout work.
That's how the world works I guess...
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