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Published: 2011-05-03 14:03:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description You say she's pretty
When I find her beautiful
She seems like she's quiet
Or overly mutable.

Maybe she's just cute
That's a limited review
She called herself pleasant
When that's artfully untrue.

You could call her adorable
Or just simply lovely
Her voice is endearing
Her person is bubbly

He claimed her his favorite
The beloved little shrew
A dulcet array
Of honeysuckle he grew

They whisper "She's elegant"
and the noise is just delectable
the refined appearance
I find it quite regrettable

Your childish style
I find so innocent
Oh you naive writer
She can be your stimulant

I don't need her anymore.
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Comments: 2

beck4ever [2011-05-05 02:10:36 +0000 UTC]

I honestly think that if they're that interested in their writing they need to really step up to the plate and want to learn. Not just want to be complimented.

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Erisithia In reply to beck4ever [2011-05-05 03:13:06 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY

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