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DarthMegress — What Can You Do?
Published: 2012-08-21 03:29:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 486; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 3
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Description "What can you do, oh, what can you do?
When the entire world has turned against you?
When all hope seems to disappear?
Can you tell me what to do here?

When all hope is lost, and the good times fade,
When good memories and smiles die away.
What can you do, oh, what can you do?
To help me, somehow, make a breakthrough?"

"Thinking dark thoughts will get you nowhere,
If you do think dark thoughts, then you'd best beware.
To ruin one life, you ruin countless others'
And you'll be the one who is 'under the covers'.

So remember this when going through life,
At the end of a tunnel, there is always a light.
And whenever you're feeling very sad or blue,
Remembering this is what you can do"
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Comments: 6

Kerriaa [2012-08-21 10:00:54 +0000 UTC]

What I like about this poem is its positive message. It is simple, well worded, straight to the point, and gives hopes for those who have none.
I also like your explanation, it clarifies certain things and lifts up the whole poem beautifully.
Well done ^.^

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DarthMegress In reply to Kerriaa [2012-08-21 15:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Kerriaa In reply to DarthMegress [2012-08-21 21:32:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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JagJag09 [2012-08-21 04:03:55 +0000 UTC]

this is a beautiful poem. It's very true

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DarthMegress In reply to JagJag09 [2012-08-21 15:16:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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JagJag09 In reply to DarthMegress [2012-08-21 20:18:02 +0000 UTC]

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