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Published: 2011-01-29 00:48:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 670; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 21
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Description
Feeling abit free right now...feels goodI would like from to Critue me please
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Model
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Background
Ocean & Beach
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Sky
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Brushes
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Made in PS CS3
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Comments: 11
wlcome!! i am daiana friends dax whats ur name
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Thank you glad u like it
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My dear Michelle , This is such a beautiful work of art. The colors are absolutely captivating . I adore how you've captured a delicious sence of warmth and beauty even through the storm and rain .It makes a very clear and powerful statement of not letting a little rain or bad luck prevent you from living your life to the fullest. So bravo there ! Technically speaking , all of your elements are well put together and blended creating a lovely sence of depth and flow.However the woman's shadow (based on the lighting and painted light rays) should come foward to the frame instead of back. I don't think many will notice though as it is not distracting from the pure emotion in this . The Rain also falls a bit short of wow though as well. It does not apear as if it is raining everywhere but just in front of everything instead. To create a better sence of depth with it , I would recommend either using the same brush to create some smaller rain streaks with a lower opacity , OR switching from painted rain to a texture like [link] with the layer blend mode set to "soft light" Other than the rain , I think this work is fantastic !! Keep up the good work my friend !!
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Thanks so much Brandy for the compliments and the thoughtful critique. And with your pointers I shall tear it to bits and adjust as you have suggested.
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It is always a pleasure my dear. I love watching your work develop and grow. You just keep getting better and better .
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