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Published: 2010-02-06 16:49:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 46249; Favourites: 1838; Downloads: 0
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Thanks !

This the original character :
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Here is the description :-
I would want to change some things for Azaelyn. First off, the skirt/top design I LOVE. I would want to keep that, except I would like to make the front of the top shorter to show her stomach and get rid of the straps at her neck and collar. Her boots need to be knee high and NOT balloon out at the top like that. I'd prefer them straight leg. Keep the thigh highs and garter straps, but change the mini skirt into a pair of short shorts that don't cover all her ass, though that can't be seen in the back due to the skirt thingy (as her husband, I wish the skirt wasn't there but oh well). The black needs to be far richer, and to be honest, the designs on the back of the skirt are NOT necessary. Maybe instead of that, trim em in black lacy frilly stuff instead. This is just a reference for the dress design because I have NO idea how to explain it all in words. She is quite busty as shown in the first linked picture.

She has a pair of red lensed steam punk goggles she keeps on her forehead.


Also, instead of wielding swords like she is shown here, she uses two revolvers that hold 5 bullets each (if that matters). She keeps them in holsters on her hips. Whether she has them out or not is up to you.


I know this might be complicated but if you need help please let me know and we'll do our best to help out. Feel free to put your own spin on things if you'd like or think something better might work. Basically she has a very steam punkish look to her.
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Comments: 53

Loveritaz [2012-07-31 08:04:28 +0000 UTC]

nice

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shadowreapers239 [2012-01-14 03:36:14 +0000 UTC]

beautiful artwork

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qtrek [2011-07-10 04:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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Techibunny [2011-03-17 01:55:40 +0000 UTC]

AIOOOOONNNN!!!

(Its pathetic that I knew that from the shape of the skirt.)

I like how u changed it up X_X looks purddy

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karnf3st [2011-03-04 12:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Inspired by Magna Carta?

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Levia-the-Dragon [2011-02-25 07:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Huh... makes me wonder why the changes were so extensive... ah well, a very nice gunslinger girl design.

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spanjebob89 [2010-10-22 21:27:02 +0000 UTC]

nice work keep up the good work

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RolandBoyce [2010-10-16 08:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing pic ,love it !

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ang-ahiera [2010-09-29 18:27:15 +0000 UTC]

euuuu mantab bangett

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CaptLaSoul [2010-09-03 08:18:55 +0000 UTC]

I thought this looked strangely reminiscent of Kim Hyung Tae. Good job.

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gietmex [2010-09-02 19:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome you got some real nice skills

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soulsam [2010-09-02 14:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice and unique style, your being added to my watch .

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CrimsonDenizen [2010-08-20 21:39:44 +0000 UTC]

not a bad source of inspiration. kim is the best ^^

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Lyna-LoopS [2010-08-11 14:12:54 +0000 UTC]

maybe a little bit provocantive, no ? XD

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ebaast [2010-06-20 19:24:56 +0000 UTC]

awesome you are pro designer

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salahh [2010-06-07 10:12:59 +0000 UTC]

very colorfull charming style you have a little similar touch with huang tae kim artist of magna carta, this is a master

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ILL-I-AM [2010-05-16 03:13:44 +0000 UTC]

LOVELY.

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darkn2ght [2010-05-11 16:38:41 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful! please do tell me how u shade her lovely stockinged legs and coat tails!thanks~

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otakujen [2010-05-05 16:13:36 +0000 UTC]

niiiice~

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HolyJennysan [2010-02-11 16:57:05 +0000 UTC]

LOVED! YOUR ART'S A LOT TO REMEMBER TAE KIM HYUNG (SOMETHING SO, WHAT DID THE DRAWINGS OF MAGNA CARTA!) I LOVE THE ART OF IT PULLS! I knelt to heaven if you make a tutorial on how COLOR SO! Q WAS NOT A HALF! XD

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tanglong [2010-02-10 06:11:31 +0000 UTC]

smart!!

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Yuffie1972 [2010-02-10 01:14:40 +0000 UTC]

It's always good to be influenced
by other artists .... your tryin to find your own nitche and even if this is simular to Hyung Tae Kim you are tryin your best to make it your way !! good job!!!!

Besides I have many artist influences too Shhhh you did see that LOLz keep up the good work

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CeeMarcuS [2010-02-09 22:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Why the heck do't I have you on my watch list....!!!

dude you just made it to my fav artists list!

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poncy-rogue [2010-02-09 12:09:57 +0000 UTC]

I'd suggest finding your own way to depict character designs, like your own style or your own unique view of them because right now all I can tag you for is Hyung Tae Kim. So if it's important for your work to be recognized as your work, than I would suggest maybe experimenting beyond the basics of inspiration to find a way to turn this into something by you. I don't see this issue in some of your other pieces, so maybe this one's particularly similar because it's a girl...?

I'm only bringing this up because Hyung Tae Kim is a very common "similar style" guy I see with character designs and you have a lot of talent.

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Nx3Fox [2010-02-08 19:31:22 +0000 UTC]

The costume design is pretty sexy and cool.
Her posture is nice too.
I like this one.

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srt2024 [2010-02-08 16:25:27 +0000 UTC]

looks perfect

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HandMader [2010-02-07 17:40:27 +0000 UTC]

I dunno why but I have to fav it!

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ChainsxApples [2010-02-07 17:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Very... subtle but sexy? xD I like it!

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Underyaya [2010-02-07 15:50:30 +0000 UTC]

this like an Aion armor

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sawboss999 [2010-02-07 13:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god. Really awesome. Love the pose, the choice in colors and the design of the clothes.

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TsurukiMaehara [2010-02-07 12:07:20 +0000 UTC]

nicely done

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Wilya12 [2010-02-07 06:28:40 +0000 UTC]

love the style ^^

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Estrelas [2010-02-07 03:04:24 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Reminds me of Magna Carta a bit (although I've never played the game). But this is honestly really cool!

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MutantBabyProduction [2010-02-07 02:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice pose

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Sajak [2010-02-07 02:49:15 +0000 UTC]

This is a blatant ripoff Hyung Tae Kim. See for yourself here:

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Estrelas In reply to Sajak [2010-02-07 03:02:29 +0000 UTC]

But that's not really a bad thing, is it? He's not really copying and people fine inspiration from pics all the time. Maybe he wanted a pose reference? Just saying.

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thrudeyes In reply to Estrelas [2010-03-28 15:46:17 +0000 UTC]

in my opinion.....it is waaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo diiiiifffffeeereeeeeennnccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...........

might be a lil bit of somethin similar but its waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy toooooooooooooooooooo fffffffffaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrr.....

above is pure awesome innovation of total redesign.P-E-R-I-O-D

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Beren89 [2010-02-07 02:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice pic, great style, I love it

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juandapo [2010-02-07 01:56:28 +0000 UTC]

so sexy, i luv the outfit

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KFC24Gordon [2010-02-07 01:51:00 +0000 UTC]

what a lovely commission

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Mikki-Tsukiyomi [2010-02-07 01:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Really cool! Makes me think of Final Fantasy designs X3

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BurnMySong [2010-02-07 01:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Magna Carta!!!

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Acieldama [2010-02-07 00:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Bodacious.

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Spoiler01 [2010-02-06 21:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow dude you make her look sexy and hot

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TeenTitansMan [2010-02-06 20:01:28 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous. Her black and red ensemble is quite stylish

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RageVX [2010-02-06 17:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah!!

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ShabbyChick [2010-02-06 17:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Great stuff. I always find it hard to put a bit of variety into a pose when it's a full length of a character and there isn't much scope for movement, but I've love the posed you've popped her into! Very nice.

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Joorin4711 [2010-02-06 17:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Taking into account the cloth hanging from her derrière, it looks a little odd to have a crotch with light on it.

The shadows suggest a light source in her upper left making this look a bit ... artificial.

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MiseryandAzaelyn [2010-02-06 16:59:48 +0000 UTC]

The commission looks amazing. Everything is perfect and wonderful. I got this for my wife of her character and she's absolutely in love with it. Not only is it a wonderful commission with a great style but it was also fast!

It was a great pleasure to commission you and I hope to do so in the future. Thanks for making this an awesome day. Her outfit is hot/great, her hair is awesome looking, I love the pose ... all of it is just fantastic.

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bayanghitam In reply to MiseryandAzaelyn [2010-02-06 17:05:53 +0000 UTC]

Million thanx for giving me this oppurtunity~
Your pleasure is my satisfaction

Thanks again !

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