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Balletbabymari — Love's Miser
Published: 2004-03-07 00:13:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 34
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Description I see cruelty in my green eyes.
It incidently coincides
with the ice that's in my black heart
that freezes love, so it won't part
the selfishness within my soul.
I'll keep all joy; it is my goal.

Even though I cannot feel it,
it's all mine, and none can steal it!
Though frozen love will not help me,
I'll not share it, I'll be wealty.
I'm a miser hoarding feelings.
You're the one that begs for dealings
of some love, but I'm unbending.
It's all mine and not for spending.
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Comments: 9

CalmB4theStorm [2004-03-29 21:07:56 +0000 UTC]

I really love this poem... its beautiful!

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Balletbabymari In reply to CalmB4theStorm [2004-03-29 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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CalmB4theStorm In reply to Balletbabymari [2004-03-30 02:32:26 +0000 UTC]

netime

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Gods-Jester [2004-03-07 17:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Never cease to amaze me. You have a shit load of talent! Love the juxtaposition of greed with love! Very nice.

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Balletbabymari In reply to Gods-Jester [2004-03-08 02:20:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...

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TormentedSorrows [2004-03-07 16:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice! this is an awesome poem I like the eerie feeling I get when I read the first stanza. Great job It deserves a lot more than two people commenting...

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Balletbabymari In reply to TormentedSorrows [2004-03-08 02:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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StriderHiryu [2004-03-07 00:16:08 +0000 UTC]

beatifull model

is that venes? venesa? that city with lots of rive in italy I dunno the name in english ehheh

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Balletbabymari In reply to StriderHiryu [2004-03-07 00:44:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i'm the model! *so flattered*
and yes, it's Venice.

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