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Published: 2011-05-23 06:33:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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worth of lineart commission for . Done this two weeks ago but I only had the money to scan this today. The girl is Asuka, OC of lovely *gigi-chama . Haha, my lineart isn't the cleanest but I did my best to emphasize some lines.Couldn't resist adding little details, though.
Still working on *punkbune 's commish..
Oh, if you're interested to commish me, find more info HERE
Comments and FAVES are mostly welcomed !!
If you find any flaws in this work, feel free to CRITIQUE me !!
That's all !!
smile and always be happy !!
Lovelots,
=ALzRitH
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Comments: 27
You seem to be handling the pen quite well (I'm assuming it's pen work on paper since you scanned it). I'm enjoying a lot out of this picture. The outfit looks well rendered especially around the sleeve puffs and skirt ruffles. You've done a very good job of showing a young face that's a little shy, and her hair looks like you've put a lot of effort into it.
It's a little hard to tell exactly what's happening in her torso. Mostly because I can't tell what kind of dress component you're trying to draw. I assumed it was a corset-like thing from the straps, but then when the corset comes over her breasts, it ends in this unnatural way.
Hope this helped!
-Scisyhp
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Ah thank you for the critique !! 
I am glad someone pointed that out. I promise to improve it next time.
Thank you again !
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You're very welcome! Keep up the good work! :3
Don't worry about the confusion; developing your skills and presenting material is all a part of being an artist.
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I am glad that you understand !
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OOOOO~ Thank you so much~! She looks awesome and cute and ahhhh~~~! WHY U SO GOOD AT ART??
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awh I am glad that you like it !! 
btw, where have you beeeeeeeeeen ?!?!
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But... I love it B)
Haha
Uhhh... I'm not sure, probably... around
I just ain't on here anymore, kid.
By the way, do you have a Skype? We can talk through there
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Haha, I have Skype but then I don't know how to use it.
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Uh-oh... I don't necessarily have one of those...
Don't worry, I'm not too sure myself how to use one o' dem Skypes.
But we should talk through there anyways, mine's Gigi.Kal.
Oh, by the way! I read your recent articles and journals about the prayers.
I just wanna let you know that you're a good person, and what you're willing to do for others is very kind, and not many people are like you. I hope you know and love the person you are
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Awww such beautifull girl we see here! 
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Really ?? Thank you friend !!
if I explain here how I do that, it'd be a pretty long one. If you want, I can submit a little tutorial for that. Would you like it ?
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You are welcome!
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yay gonna submit it next week !
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GORGEOUS lineart!!! I wish I could color it but I can't
keep up the good work!
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Thank you !!
It's perfectly fine with me if you colour it though you can ask *gigi-chama 's persmission also.
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Very cute. The pose and body position is good, as well as the way she is standing. It has a believable look-which is a good thing when drawing people! Good job!
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WoW!! She's so cute!! I like this drawing so much!!
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adorable!
love her pose <3 so cute
and the clothing is adorableeeeee
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Very adorable dress she's wearing, and pretty expression too! ^^
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