alwayzdazd [2003-08-25 16:37:44 +0000 UTC]

In droves people hold the rail,
following what they see is right,
off they go a walking, forever in the night.

And they will always continue to walk...thinking they have the answers, blind to their own ignorance...sad, really.

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cheshiresphynx [2003-08-13 20:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, I really like that poem! I could probably draw a picture to that... "Kindness and endangered species" DAMN straight! I wonder why too...

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cannibalives [2003-08-12 22:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written, beautifully drawn. You are one of those rare artists that can express so much in so little, in writing and image.

Can't wait to see more. I'm watching you!

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wyreth [2003-08-12 22:29:41 +0000 UTC]

This was a poem written for those last 3 lines... it just isn't any good before then... but I couldn't find a more eliquant way to get there.

-Wy

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zarula [2003-08-12 13:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Those last lines are kinda creepy. They made my heart beat a bit faster, thats hard to find in short poems... good job.

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