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Published: 2005-05-26 21:17:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 32; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Blood redSuffering dead
Crying all day
Needing to pray
Gods not there
Seeming not to care
Doesn’t answer me
Won’t let me free
Can’t see straight
Dark and late
Church is empty
Leaving stains
Tied down in chains
Covered in lies
Everyone tries
Understanding
Not possible
Comments: 2
LgthAoshi14 [2005-05-26 21:26:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't know how you do it, but your writing is grand! Bravo
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IamNoOne22FL [2005-05-26 21:20:26 +0000 UTC]
with the exception of a few lines that break the rhyming pattern it flows very well for having so few syllables....I like it ^^
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