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Published: 2009-12-11 17:26:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Wasp

The girl
The lover
The knife
The whispers
The thought that it shouldn't be anyone else
The stab
The twist
The stinger being pulled out softly
The bow to the audience
The downfall
The widow, crying
The famous last words of consolation and gratitude
The last tender moment
The end

The legacy
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Comments: 2

closedeyes [2010-06-27 22:42:23 +0000 UTC]

the metaphor was very clear, I really enjoyed the simplistic way of highlighting the stand out scenes of any breakup.

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tatuued [2009-12-11 20:44:18 +0000 UTC]

even though it was two years ago I understand that well.. (especially with the "note" explanation) I never put anything in my notes.. maybe I should.. but sometimes I think leaving it up to the reader makes it more mysterious.. but sometimes a note is needed..

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