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NervPoison — Destroy All Your Followers
Published: 2010-08-09 20:16:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Destroy All Your Followers

Of the poor pitiful Ideal.
The One I too
Have given into...

You used to be such a normal beautiful perfect person.
Until the delicate silk that was you
Was spun into a hurricane in your own image.
Rubies circling in your twister,
Relentless luster thrown to you by the enticed.
Scraping off their dignity with every twirl.

The captivated are corrupted:
Solemns spirits knead into pathetic lumps.
Their knees insist to cushion the ground below,

And...
You only wished to converse...
But...

The blades of beauty scatter the perfume of future wounds.
I see tears dwindling somewhere in the midst of it:
You wish not to tingle, dare not tantalize,
And yet you destroy everything you touch.
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Comments: 2

SadisticButterfly [2010-08-09 23:47:34 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, and I'm not just saying that. I'm trying to find something I can really pick apart and be nitpicky with, but I can't. The ending especially is so sad. I can really empathise with it.

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gamma-rider [2010-08-09 20:34:53 +0000 UTC]

I like your alliteration and rhymes or near rhymes such as twister and luster. This is a bit challenging and certainly not for those either very young or impatient.

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