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# Statistics

Favourites: 121; Deviations: 0; Watchers: 24

Watching: 61; Pageviews: 8443; Comments Made: 343; Friends: 61


# Comments

Comments: 76

FallingTear [2005-02-15 16:12:24 +0000 UTC]

Love your poems and hope to read more. Above all stands the Offcorist Manifesto, that's for sure. I'd like to keep in touch with you, share thoughts & co.

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jesusbite [2005-02-14 00:40:12 +0000 UTC]

So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.

Happiness , by .
The Interview , by .
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia , by .

So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.



Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite

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jesusbite [2005-02-14 00:38:49 +0000 UTC]

So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.

Happiness , by .
The Interview , by .
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia , by .

So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.



Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite

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silentbride [2005-02-11 08:08:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the watch too

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silentbride [2005-02-11 08:07:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for the fav

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livingbyair [2004-03-28 21:52:29 +0000 UTC]

finger rape can be interpreted loosely.

Essentially, the whole poem is about how people had issues just like they do now but they tried to hide them. rape/abuse was just another issue, just like a kid might stick his finger in a pie.

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sanscesse [2004-03-25 15:37:21 +0000 UTC]

You found meh! .... Oh wait! I'm across the hall!

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epimetheus [2004-03-16 07:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch list addition.

Adam

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livingbyair [2004-02-09 02:49:19 +0000 UTC]

HAHA

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echo-si [2004-01-19 22:51:52 +0000 UTC]

and (hit submit too soon)

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echo-si [2004-01-19 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
I still need to work my way back through your gallery, I somehow missed a lot.

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livingbyair [2004-01-04 06:38:56 +0000 UTC]

sigh.

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livingbyair [2003-12-04 23:12:13 +0000 UTC]

more prose poetry. yes.

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decemberist-apathy [2003-11-23 05:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Just mentioning The Decemberists, Tim Kasher and Pedro the Lion would've been enough, but you write amazing peotry and prose also.

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losttruth [2003-10-09 21:52:45 +0000 UTC]

you are so very watched.

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tresspasser [2003-10-08 05:18:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for adding me to your friends list!!

-sophia

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livingbyair [2003-10-08 05:05:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm shocked reading your comment, telling me to check out prose poetry.

the thing is

i've been expiramenting with it A LOT recently, many of my last 10 posts are prose-poetry.

check out 'Homemade bombs' & 'Living woods'

tell me how i did?

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livingbyair [2003-10-08 05:01:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the recomendation!

you deserve more attention, hope you catch some!

and - i wanna see more post from you from now on! - na na, but i enjoy your work.

take care.

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spoonfork [2003-10-06 15:42:27 +0000 UTC]

welcome to my watch!

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electricat [2003-10-04 01:31:44 +0000 UTC]

you are good.

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-blackscarling- [2003-10-04 00:55:26 +0000 UTC]

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undefinability [2003-10-03 17:08:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I'm very glad you wrote that.
I haven't read anything like that for a while - and it really is a breath of fresh air.

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citizenerased [2003-10-03 09:13:04 +0000 UTC]

not many people leave me standing here,with words falling directly off of me.you do.and its good.its new.
with every piece read I wish it would not end
but it does.and even that has something like a lesson for me to it
hope to hear more from you


nova

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tmpst24myst [2003-10-03 04:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Hi. ~livingbyair found and now I'm going to keep you. Just thought you should know.

Dae

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tmpst24myst In reply to tmpst24myst [2003-10-03 04:21:33 +0000 UTC]

And that missing word would be 'you.'

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undefinability [2003-10-03 03:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Be prepared to be watched by this deviant.

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secrets-or-lies [2003-09-23 08:28:43 +0000 UTC]

where's some new stuff colin? waiting for a while now. oh well how are things in laramie, how's everyone(jeremy lindsey dave bryce etc...) well talk later

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livingbyair [2003-09-22 03:47:56 +0000 UTC]

suggest something for me?

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livingbyair [2003-09-22 03:46:32 +0000 UTC]

hey man - you still kicken!?

nice - hah - you wont remember, when i first started on devart - you were one of the first writers i really showed an interest, sorry i lost contact.

im lookin foward to readin some of your recents.

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nonculture [2003-09-20 15:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Could have sworn I'd been over here before...anyway thanks for your comment on Origins. I will be reading through your gallery soon, B.

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summerheart [2003-09-16 16:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your comment and favorite. I particularly love comments that come from a seemingly intelligent source. Checking out your work...

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ndifference [2003-09-15 13:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. No, bless you with a copious profusion of ubiquitous praise.

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secrets-or-lies [2003-09-15 08:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Check the journal and you'll understand. SORRY.

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secrets-or-lies [2003-09-15 08:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Colin love your writing, tell jeremy i say hi and ill see you soon.

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tangledweb [2003-09-15 05:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey Colin! Just wanted to thank you for the comment and the fav, was a pleasant surprise. Take care!

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dunny [2003-07-30 04:17:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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cheshirecheck [2003-07-26 04:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the cool comments, man. I'm with you - Moses is like a comedic lightning rod.

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devilicious [2003-07-24 02:06:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much - yes that was taken in 1969 actually that is my stepfather. it is second in the father day series - the image b/f it is my biological father, etc. glad it touched you and thank you for letting me know it did.

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darklies [2003-07-08 00:58:39 +0000 UTC]

youre being watched

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terov [2003-06-26 02:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Journal = ouch... That's not the nicest thing I've heard.
Backslide? I don't think that's possible for human beings; just can't stop learning, no matter where we are in life...

Huh.
Who knows. Not this Jeremy; he's who he's always been, who he'll always be, just an idea in a mind that sometimes changes clothes.

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thebeautifulfoot [2003-06-23 09:22:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comments, they made me happy like only ice cream and teddy bears and long walks on the beaches only can

not really, more like happy like taking pictures happy or happy like mocha frappichinos

but happy nonetheless

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opalescient [2003-06-19 07:20:00 +0000 UTC]

A musician and a writer! Wow, you beat me there. Thanks for the comment - it was very meaningful. Your poetry is very intense, my gut kinda reeled on your most recent one... but I guess strong emotions make the best art. You have very interesting things to say... now if you could only play the guitar while singing a poem. That'd be great. Thanks again man. Maybe I'll buy a CD one day if you start a band.

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q2railgun [2003-06-19 03:35:27 +0000 UTC]

hey man, thanks for the comment. nobody else seemed to even like them.. i guess they weren't "flashy" enough and didn't contain enough boobs.

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saikatsu [2003-06-15 20:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment! Yeah, I realize I botched the first version of that skin, I can't believe I forgot to change that part of the playlist.
I'd comment on something of yours in return, but I'm not much of a written art person and I wouldn't have anything worth saying in response to it.

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beneath-the-mist [2003-05-27 04:45:13 +0000 UTC]

the few things i have seen so far have blown my mind. +dev watch in hopes of soaking it all in.

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sckamb [2003-05-10 10:09:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks sooo much for your wonderful cmomment!!

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tresspasser [2003-05-04 19:08:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comment on photochallenge eggs!

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tresspasser [2003-05-03 00:51:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comments. hehe..vw.

you should visit sf again.. it's the greatest city in my opinion.

although barcelona and nyc come damned close.

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sckamb [2003-04-24 23:04:59 +0000 UTC]

hey ya..thanks again!!!!! andrea

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sckamb [2003-04-22 20:38:32 +0000 UTC]

hey...thanks sooo much and thx for the note and the fav!!!!!!
cool that u like it!!
andrea

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